Love the story, hated the editing
3
By lb2307
The story of this book was cute. The new character of Ryker was really great.
But what ruined it were the many many grammatical errors and small plot holes.
It almost felt like maybe this was all written in 1 sitting and never reread. One minute they’re eating chicken, the next it’s actually steak. He wants to shower, never mind, forgot that idea, story continues as if he had never said it.
These are small things but they add up and become frustrating to read.
If it wasn’t for that, I would have given it 5 stars. I thought it was the second best story of the whole series after the first book.
Really....
2
By PSemones
This book wasn’t as good as the first two and whoever was suppose to proofread this book should be fired. I hate to read a book with tons of typos and using the wrong words in a sentence. It aggravating to read. The last page it should have been miss instead of wish and many more. I want my $3.99 back. It’s sad when you start highlighting errors because there are so many of them. Who proofread your book a second grader.
Excellent
5
By Dobielady2
I’ve read all 3 books back to back because I couldn’t put them down. Good character description. I felt like I knew them as the writer did when she created them.
Good story line- poorly edited.
5
By Sarahkulp0613
I've never seen so many grammatical problems in a book before. And overall the series is basically the same love story but the characters are replaced. They fall in love in two pages& then the climax lasts three sentences. Then they live happily ever after.
Enjoyable but...
4
By Noriinny
... It almost feels like different people are writing these books and they haven't all read the others. Case in point, in the first book Cat went to college on a full scholarship yet later in the series she's got tons of student loan debt. Then Heath asked her to marry him yet in a later book she states he has never asked her to get married. And in this book Let Me In a lot of the sentences don't make sense. It's not really typos but more like someone was copy and pasting where whole sentences just don't make sense. All in all though it's a good story and I feel the intensity of the main characters. I would recommend this book.
Love the story, hate the grammatical errors!!
4
By Mom42girlz2
Love the story and the characters. But someone needs to fix all the grammatical errors. It's beyond ridiculous.
Great light romance
3
By Jenkegley
The story was sweet love at first site. Predictable but still fun. Definitely needs a good editor. This third book was somewhat sloppy in that department.
Sucked me in
5
By Jessicam224
I couldn't put it down and finished in one day. Amazing. It captured at my heart strings and didn't let go. Thank you!
Good book!!
5
By Big bull Akita
Really liked it!!!!!! Love both characters and was a really good feel book!!
Let me in
5
By Brittcum
I could not put this book down! Just like I couldn't put down the other two books in this series! I can't wait for the 4th to come out in December!